Monday, 25 April 2016

That that that that that that

I have been culling. Viciously and mercilessly. I ripped 13k words out of my current MS, which still wasn’t enough - but it was a decent sizable chunk.

  To be honest, most of them were the word “that”, which clearly I overuse when writing. Still, knowing this now makes the first sweep a lot easier. “Really” and “actually” were up there too.
I tried to load the full MS into a word cloud programme to see if it would highlight the words I overuse, but they seem to automatically take out the basics, “that” being one of them, which rather defeats the object. If anyone can recommend a good (free) world cloud generator, please let me know.

  Now I guess I need to bite the bullet and ‘kill some darlings’. I’m too much of a wuss to kill them outright; I place everything in the outtakes file, telling myself it is only temporary, I’m just trying it out to see what it will look like without, of course it will always be welcome back into the fold – and then promptly forget the passage as soon as I return to the main text. So much for loyalty to the words. So fickle…
  
A side effect has been that I am now the “That Police” with every published novel I currently read. Every time I see one, I question whether it is necessary. And don’t get me started on contractions in dialogue! We all know that when culling, contracting words is a starter for ten, but not only that, without them dialogue can be so very stilted. I just struggled through what would otherwise have been a perfectly decent novel, because I was gritting my teeth every time the author failed to contract them words.

 So I am seeing that this is one of the pitfalls of being a writer – you totally screw up your reading by deconstructing all other writing. (The ‘that’ in that line should go…)  

Tuesday, 1 March 2016

*Cue Birdsong* My Spring '16 TBR Pile

It’s Spring, and I’m feeling re-energised and raring to go on this new pile;




A small but balanced pile this month with a fairly equal blend of YA, Romance and Thrillers. Three of these books are at least part-written by men (and no, I haven’t counted Robert Galbraith as that would be cheating), so my equality points are up on last month.

Losing it by Helen Lederer (Contemporary Romance)
The best thing that never happened to me by Laura Tait and Jimmy Rice (Contemporary Romance)
A Girl’s Best Friend by Lindsey Kelk (Contemporary Romance)
The Reunion by Amy Silver (not sure, Contemporary Fiction maybe)
Never evers by Tom Ellen and Lucy Ivison (YA)
Geek Girl – Picture Perfect by Holly Smale (YA)
Riverkeep by Martin Stewart (YA Fantasy)
The Girl on the Train by Paula Hawkins (Thriller)
Career of Evil by Robert Galbraith (Thriller)

Riverkeep is an ARC I’ve been sent. It’s a debut and has maps in the front, which I LOVE in a book. It says straight away that you're about to be taken off somewhere.
Career of Evil is a book I’ve been waiting for for ages. (In case you don’t know Robert Galbraith is JK Rowling, and every time there's a swear – and there are plenty- I can’t help but think “oooh JK, naughty.”)
The Girl on the Train everyone is mentionning so I thought I’d see what the fuss is about.
Lindsey Kelk is one of my writing role models, so this was a given.
The rest are fairly random picks, to be honest, but I’ve had some great surprises from random picks before.


I’ll post again if I add more, and as there is still room, feel free to recommend any you've recently loved.

Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Winter '15 Gut Reactions

Diving straight in, the pile looked like this,
with the addition of three Christmas books (see previous blog entry).


Book of the Season immediately went to If You Find Me by Emily Murdoch, which blew me away.  It’s the story of a girl brought up in the woods for ten years. I don’t want to give too many spoilers away, because much of the skill in this book lies in the information unfurling. The book starts as she’s coming out of the woods and covers her initial rehabilitation into normal life while keeping a dark secret. I loved it and had to reread it straight off. It had me on the brink of tears at various times, it was heart-breaking and tender without resorting to any melodrama. I’d say it was a YA mix of Emma Donoghue’s Room and Sara Dessen’s Lock and Key.

All the Bright Places by Jennifer Niven looks at teen suicide and bipolar disorder. It was touching and sad, but more than that it really brought across the mystified feelings of grief and loss that those left behind experience in cases of suicide, while sympathetically showing that those who choose to leave us are unable to help themselves do otherwise. Again it's hard to write about without spoilers but the excellent dialogue meant I genuinely loved a key character, and couldn’t feel angry at them for doing what they do, which conflicted with my previous feelings on the subject. That is very vague- sorreee- but The Spoilers!

Being Billy by Phil Earle. This one did actually make me cry. Set in a children’s home, it’s a whole book of anger and frustration, yet has you rooting for the MC; despairing with him at the unfairness of his situation and cheering with him in his small victories. Utter rollercoaster.


Landline by Rainbow Rowell was a pleasure to read. She gives a snap shot of what is the scenario for many 40-something women, who get to reflect on their marriages and see that they have slipped, provoking them to consider what they really want. On top of the accurate observations, she writes and details sooo enviably well.
The Anatomy of Curiosity by Maggie Stiefvater, Tessa Gratton and Brenna Yovanoff is a book I’d recommend if you have any interest in creative writing yourself, especially short stories. I’d suggest reading its predecessor, the short story anthology The Curiosities first, as you'll get a feel for the varied style of these three writers. Here they each have just the one story, but they deconstruct them to show how they got the ideas and what they focused on during writing. All good stories in themselves, but with an added layer of writing craft which was fascinating.


The other thoughts;
 One of these turned me off in chapter one. My negative reaction was to the premise of the book. I did read to the end, as the form was interesting; one half being one character’s POV and the second being the other character’s POV taking the action forward, but I couldn’t get past finding the story line itself unappealing.
 One of these books I wanted to love very very badly, because I think the writer is a goddess with a turn of phrase to die for. But I didn’t love it and I’m still trying to work out why. The POV wasn’t always consistent and that felt kind of sloppy.
One of these books has had a lot of hype in the UK but I found it an uncomforatable read, partly because I felt I’d read the same kind of thing before and partly because I felt I’d lived some of it before. The familiar story was personally painfully familiar.


The Spring pile is building and I’ll post it next week. Anyone read anything good lately?

Monday, 11 January 2016

Lucky Extras

My TBR pile this season was a little small, but as I mentioned, I was hoping that Santa/Father Christmas/Julemanden might add some. And indeed Lovely Santa CP sent me some books (and chocs  to scoff while reading them because she thinks of Everything).

Here they are;

Landline by Rainbow Rowell
The Anatomy of Curiosity by Maggie Stiefvater, Tessa Gratton and Brenna Yovanoff. (Look at that cover!!! Just look at it. The Pretty.) 
The Year We Hid Away by Sarina Bowen

Consider them added please.

Thursday, 7 January 2016

Happy 2016 Planning!

Happy New Year lovelies! I hope you all had a very merry festive season.

Here, the kids are back in school and the dust is settling so it feels like time to pull myself together again, stop gorging on all the chocolate (So. Hard!) and get back to the words.

I like to look back on what I was prattling on about at this time the previous year, to see what I had planned and what I managed. I listed it here, but to summarise; I’d barfed up three stories in rougher-than-rough form and planned to set about them during the year with a swinging bat. 

I started the Vomit-draft-to-First-draft beating of Story one, but at chapter 10 and four months in I decided to shelve it. I know we are supposed to finish things we start. I know, I know. But it just didn’t have the mileage. Maybe it will see the light of day one day, but not for now and the decision felt right. I started working on Story three instead and finished the first proper draft at the end of November. It is a full-length women’s fiction story and, by some small miracle for me, it even has a plot. I left it to mull and then read it over Christmas. I read it on a sunlounger, on my kindle, to make it feel like a real book. I made notes. Serious or what?

Soooo, looking forward; my plan for the first part of this year is to put those notes to use to get a second draft nailed down and then start the submission’s shenanigans to agents. Then I’ll either start the process again with Story two, or face writing from scratch a YA story that keeps knocking to come out but scares me.

I also have the annual Valentines story swap with my lovely CP to write. It was my turn to select the prompt, which I have, but now cannot come up with any useful ideas. Probably the smart thing was pick a prompt I had an idea for. Doh. Still, there’s a month to go on that one…

That’s what’s happening here, and making me happy. Other than the lack of Valentine's idea, the 2016 plan doesn't make me want to say "Eek", unlike other years. 

 Any 2016 writing resolutions/plans for any of you out there? Share please!

Tuesday, 1 December 2015

*Cue sleighbells* My Winter '15 TBR Pile

'Tis the season to be reading, fal a la la lah, la la la lahhhhh.
Mmmm, I think Winter was designed for books, along with sofas, woodburners, slippers and hot drinks, preferably mulled wine. (Yes, mulled wine, even into February. Get the 
ready-made bottled stuff. Easy peasy and they discount it in January. Win!)

The pile looks like this;


Being Billy by Phil Earle (YA)
Saving Daisy by Phil Earle (YA)
A kiss in the dark by Cat Clarke (YA)
If you find me by Emily Murdoch (YA)
How to build a girl by Caitlin Moran (YA)
All the bright places by Jennifer Niven (YA)
Running on the Cracks by Julia Donaldson (YA)
The Manifesto on how to be interesting by Holly Bourne (YA)
Christmas at Rosie Hopkins’ Sweetshop by Jenny Colgan (Women’s Fiction)

It isn’t the biggest of piles, but then maybe, if I have been good this year, I might get a book from Father Christmas, or Julemanden as he is known in our house. (Look at that, a little Danish lesson there; pronounce it yoola-manen, impress your friends with your polyglot talents).

I cannot deny that it is YA heavy. Heavier than a heavy thing in fact, being almost exclusively YA, but I just finished the first revisions on the Women’s Fiction story I have been working on this year, and I had dire cravings for YA that just needed succumbing to. There is a male writer in there though and one of the books has been hanging around on my shelf for a while, so that rule has been met too. The winter-obligatory seasonal book is accounted for, care of the brilliant Jenny Colgan. Bring on the mulled wine and mince pies for that one.


What are you reading this season? Which books have you wished for? (I will assume you have been good this year.)

Wednesday, 25 November 2015

A gushing confession

So I unveil a TBR pile on the first day of each season (with the exception of the times I have been late, yes, yes, I know...). BUT, I must confess that there are times (OK, everytime) when I might just have started the pile early. I could loftily  pretend that this is to get ahead in the reading, so that I can deliver the gut reactions on time, but that would be a fib. Honestly it's because I can't stand not having a book on the go, and generally I reallllllly want to be reading the books in the pile.

Normally I wouldn't feel the need to confess to this; it's part of the mechanisms behind the curtain.
But. 
But but but. 
I think I just found my book of the year.  Yup, not just of the season but of my YEAR. And I felt the need to share. It's a beauty. Heartbreaking and uplifting, all of that.

I just can't decide whether to tell you what it is yet.....