K-I-S-S-I-N-G

  Miss Snark's First Victim is running a critique session based on first kisses. In some kind of out-of-body-experience I entered a kissy scene from one of my stories. 
These things scare the be-jeezus out of me (critiques, not kissing, that is). It feels roughly like volunteering to have tomatoes pelted at one's naked personage. 
  
 I haven't read the comments yet; I'm just about to pour the glass of wine to steel myself with, but if you have a look through the entries, can you spot which is mine? (No looking through the comments for clues, cheaty.)

 (Fairview, Liz and Yotti you are all exempt from this game - Insider knowledge!)